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The Anatomy of a Pass

David Orban · August 2026

The Anatomy of a Pass — a winding path of dark rejection letters with two blue ones among them.

Over the course of 60 days in 2026 I reviewed every pitch that reached my inbox and declined most of them. Close to a hundred rejection emails went out. Each one was a full letter: specific concerns grounded in the deck's own numbers, followed by the questions worth answering before the next investor conversation.

This is what came back. Thirty-eight founders replied. Several called it the most rigorous investor feedback they had ever received, and many answered the questions point by point.

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What is in it

  1. One pass shown in full, with the recipient blurred
  2. What the founders replied, verbatim
  3. Why I passed: the concerns that recur, ranked by frequency
  4. Stages and asks: the money behind the pitches
  5. Lessons for founders, before the next pitch

The full essay, with the charts and the founders' replies in context, is on my blog: The Anatomy of a Pass.